this is delightful, genuinely. i loved the characters and their interactions (especially their abilities to communicate relationship boundaries), the worldbuilding, the mention of dissociation during sex, and absolutely everything about rachel. thank you for putting this out there.
Honestly, that was a damn enjoyable read. I had to pause a few times to look up atmy ceiling and hope I haven't traumatised a sentient being at any point in my life.
Hehehe, I have indeed been shown that panel, but by all means let me share it for everyone in this thread ^^ This is from The Wooden Mansion, a short story by Junji Ito.
do you know i clean forgot putting that line on the end page. I think you actually are the first, after six years! congratulations! please enjoy 100 points!
Well this was a rather surreal experience, but in like, a good way? I never thought i'd enjoy reading about weird scifi-trans-lesbian-house-sex but here we are
That being said i'd love to see more stories in this universe, seems like a very interesting setting to explore and with a lot of potential for cool characters!
Really good story! but, for a "straight" minute I thought the story read my computer name, then I remembered "it cant do that...can it?" and begin to research. Have concluded; it can not read your computer name..this has been: Me being a dumb homo. Thank you.
Aw! No so far as I know that is not possible from within browser. Must have been some sort of weird coincidence. Glad you enjoyed the story, in any case!
While the story is cute and the romance is wonderful, I don't believe this is a game. This is a book. A book where you click pink words to turn the page. The story is well written and well thought out, but it falls short of being an actual game. Still you did very good with the story and Characters.
Obviously comes from the heart and a personal place I loved how you put thought into how a sentient building would be thinking and what it would notice - It felt oddly believable.
Seriously a really wonderful little game. A great idea executed brilliantly.
It's not only a well-written and terribly cute romance, but also a fascinating exploration of transhuman themes, gender, sexuality, and... architecture? Whatever genre this fits into, I love this work to death!!
the game's sweetness and genuine warmth took me by surprise. its world so fascinating & vibrant.. i feel like you let me in on some incredible secret and im very grateful you shared it with me. very touching and gay and perfect. thank you!!!
Wonderful. You painted a really vivid world, and I found myself wanting to live in it. There was lots of dopey grinning on my part. Peak gay levels. Loved the sweetness and vulnerability. Well-developed romance. A+.
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this is delightful, genuinely. i loved the characters and their interactions (especially their abilities to communicate relationship boundaries), the worldbuilding, the mention of dissociation during sex, and absolutely everything about rachel. thank you for putting this out there.
Honestly, that was a damn enjoyable read. I had to pause a few times to look up atmy ceiling and hope I haven't traumatised a sentient being at any point in my life.
Holy shit this was fucked up and gay and amazing! Thank you for putting your self / yourself / your experiences out there / here :3
This was a lovely read!!
I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
I'm probably not the first to post that Junji Ito manga panel with the woman saying the house is sexy, so I won't. But I wish I were.
Hehehe, I have indeed been shown that panel, but by all means let me share it for everyone in this thread ^^ This is from The Wooden Mansion, a short story by Junji Ito.
do you know i clean forgot putting that line on the end page. I think you actually are the first, after six years! congratulations! please enjoy 100 points!
I think of this story often, even after 5 years its still one of my all time faves <3
so sweet! love the gay FALC energy!
Well this was a rather surreal experience, but in like, a good way? I never thought i'd enjoy reading about weird scifi-trans-lesbian-house-sex but here we are
That being said i'd love to see more stories in this universe, seems like a very interesting setting to explore and with a lot of potential for cool characters!
I... uh... may have accidentally a fanfiction. We'll see how far it goes.
Oh my god! I'm glad my old story could inspire you to write. Looking forward to reading.
Really good story! but, for a "straight" minute I thought the story read my computer name, then I remembered "it cant do that...can it?" and begin to research. Have concluded; it can not read your computer name..this has been: Me being a dumb homo. Thank you.
Aw! No so far as I know that is not possible from within browser. Must have been some sort of weird coincidence. Glad you enjoyed the story, in any case!
something about lesbian house sex yeah!
Yeah indeed!
While the story is cute and the romance is wonderful, I don't believe this is a game. This is a book. A book where you click pink words to turn the page. The story is well written and well thought out, but it falls short of being an actual game. Still you did very good with the story and Characters.
Thank you! But who said it's supposed to be a game? I don't consider it such either :)
Obviously comes from the heart and a personal place I loved how you put thought into how a sentient building would be thinking and what it would notice - It felt oddly believable.
Seriously a really wonderful little game. A great idea executed brilliantly.
It's not only a well-written and terribly cute romance, but also a fascinating exploration of transhuman themes, gender, sexuality, and... architecture? Whatever genre this fits into, I love this work to death!!
This is one of the best stories iv ever read it was wonderful!!!
the game's sweetness and genuine warmth took me by surprise. its world so fascinating & vibrant.. i feel like you let me in on some incredible secret and im very grateful you shared it with me. very touching and gay and perfect. thank you!!!
Wonderful. You painted a really vivid world, and I found myself wanting to live in it. There was lots of dopey grinning on my part. Peak gay levels. Loved the sweetness and vulnerability. Well-developed romance. A+.
aaah i'm so glad you liked it! <3